Difficulty: Easy
Correct Answer: Since the area was known to be prone to earthquakes, all the buildings were reinforced with additional concrete.
Explanation:
Introduction / Context:
Sentence improvement questions test your understanding of correct grammar, clarity, and logical structure. The original sentence about an earthquake prone area has a problem with a dangling participle. The phrase "Knowing that the area was prone to earthquakes" seems to modify "all the buildings", which is illogical because buildings cannot know something. We need a better beginning that clearly links the knowledge to the people who acted on it.
Given Data / Assumptions:
- Original sentence: Knowing that the area was prone to earthquakes, all the buildings were reinforced with additional concrete.
- We need to remove the dangling participle and make the cause effect relationship clear.
- The meaning should remain that, because the area was known to be earthquake prone, reinforcement was done.
Concept / Approach:
A dangling participle appears when a participle phrase at the beginning of a sentence does not logically refer to the subject that follows. To correct this, we can replace the participle phrase with a clause starting with "Since" or "Because", and make "the area" the subject of that clause. "Since the area was known to be prone to earthquakes" correctly expresses the cause and avoids the dangling structure.
Step-by-Step Solution:
Step 1: Identify the participle phrase "Knowing that the area was prone to earthquakes" at the start of the sentence.
Step 2: Notice that the next noun phrase is "all the buildings", which cannot logically perform the act of knowing.
Step 3: Conclude that a new subject is needed which can logically be linked to the knowledge that the area was prone to earthquakes.
Step 4: Option C, "Since the area was known to be prone to earthquakes, all the buildings were reinforced with additional concrete", uses a clear subject "the area" and a conjunction "Since" to show cause.
Step 5: Compare other options and confirm that Option C is the most grammatically sound and natural.
Verification / Alternative check:
If we read Option C aloud, the sentence flows smoothly and logically. Grammar references recommend such constructions to avoid dangling participles. We could also rewrite it as "Because the area was known to be prone to earthquakes, all the buildings were reinforced with additional concrete", which is very close to Option C. This confirms that the structure chosen in Option C is correct.
Why Other Options Are Wrong:
Option A, "On being prone to earthquakes", is awkward and unidiomatic. Option B, "Having been knowing", is grammatically incorrect because "having been knowing" is not a standard verbal combination. Option D, "No improvement", wrongly accepts the dangling participle. Option E, "Because of earthquake proneness", sounds unnatural and uses an odd nominal phrase rather than a clear clause.
Common Pitfalls:
Students often ignore dangling participles if the general meaning is understandable. However, competitive exams look for precise grammar. Another mistake is to choose any option that begins with "Because" or "Since" without checking whether the rest of the sentence is natural. Always ensure that the subject matches the action logically.
Final Answer:
The best improvement is Since the area was known to be prone to earthquakes, all the buildings were reinforced with additional concrete.
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