Difficulty: Easy
Correct Answer: had
Explanation:
Introduction / Context:
This sentence improvement item tests your grasp of tense and auxiliary verb usage. The sentence reads He spoke as though his throat had had suffered an injury, with had had suffered an injury underlined. The intention is to suggest that his voice sounded like that of someone whose throat had suffered an injury in the past. However, the combination had had suffered is incorrect and redundant. You must choose the correct auxiliary form that works with suffered to express a past perfect sense if needed.
Given Data / Assumptions:
Concept / Approach:
In the clause his throat had suffered an injury, had is the auxiliary for past perfect, and suffered is the past participle of suffer. Adding another had before suffered is incorrect because had had suffered mixes a double perfect that does not make sense here. We simply need one auxiliary had followed by the past participle suffered. Also, in as though clauses referring to an unreal or unlikely condition in the past, the past perfect is appropriate. So the natural correction is had suffered an injury, not had had suffered an injury.
Step-by-Step Solution:
Verification / Alternative check:
Read the corrected sentence: He spoke as though his throat had suffered an injury. This now flows smoothly and clearly indicates a past condition that explains his strange voice. The comparison is hypothetical or imaginative, consistent with as though. If we kept the original form He spoke as though his throat had had suffered an injury, the sentence would sound grammatically broken and redundant, as English does not stack had had before a past participle in this way.
Why Other Options Are Wrong:
Option A (has had) would give his throat has had suffered an injury, which is ungrammatical; even if we tried has had an injury, it would not match the as though structure for a past condition. Option C (would have) would require would have suffered to be correct, but the given phrase forces would have suffered an injury, changing the tense and mode; it also does not match the typical pattern after as though when describing a past, unreal state. Option D (No improvement) is wrong because had had suffered is clearly an error. Option E (had been) would produce his throat had been an injury or had been suffered an injury, both of which are ungrammatical or unnatural.
Common Pitfalls:
A common source of confusion is the sequence had had in English, which is legitimate in constructions like He had had a cold earlier. However, that pattern involves had + had as a main verb, not had + had + past participle. In this sentence, suffered is already the past participle, so only one auxiliary had is required. Another pitfall is overcomplicating the as though clause; remember that you usually use simple past or past perfect after as though or as if to talk about unreal or hypothetical situations.
Final Answer:
The correct improvement is had, resulting in: He spoke as though his throat had suffered an injury.
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