Improve the bracketed part of the sentence: The guide's (knowledge) of the history of the monument surprised me.

Difficulty: Easy

Correct Answer: no improvement

Explanation:


Introduction / Context:
This question belongs to the category of sentence improvement. You are asked to decide whether the underlined or bracketed part of a sentence is correct as it stands, or whether one of the given alternatives expresses the idea in a more accurate or natural way. The focus here is on correct usage of nouns and collocations in English: how certain words naturally combine with others in standard written and spoken language.


Given Data / Assumptions:

  • Sentence: "The guide's (knowledge) of the history of the monument surprised me."
  • Bracketed expression to evaluate: "knowledge".
  • Options: "knowing", "familiarity", "know how", "no improvement", and an extra distractor.
  • The structure around the bracket is "The guide's ____ of the history".
  • We assume a formal or semi formal context, such as a tour of a historical site.


Concept / Approach:
The natural and grammatically correct expression in English is "someone's knowledge of something". Here, "the guide's knowledge of the history of the monument" is perfectly idiomatic: knowledge is a noun that fits well after a possessive form like "the guide's". The preposition "of" correctly introduces the object of that knowledge. By contrast, "knowing" is a gerund and would not normally be used directly after the possessive in this way. "Know how" is usually written with a hyphen (know-how) and refers to practical skill, not mainly historical information. "Familiarity" would usually require "with" rather than "of": "familiarity with the history", so simply replacing knowledge would create a preposition error. Therefore, the original bracketed word is already the best choice, and "no improvement" is the correct answer.


Step-by-Step Solution:
Step 1: Examine the existing phrase "the guide's knowledge of the history of the monument". It is grammatically correct and meaningful.Step 2: Test option A: "the guide's knowing of the history" sounds unnatural, because "knowing" does not usually take "of" in this noun like structure.Step 3: Test option B: "the guide's familiarity of the history" is incorrect collocation; standard English uses "familiarity with" rather than "familiarity of".Step 4: Test option C: "the guide's know how of the history" is incorrect both in form (missing hyphen) and in meaning; know-how refers to practical skill rather than detailed historical information.Step 5: Recognise that none of the alternatives improve the sentence; they either introduce errors or change the meaning.Step 6: Conclude that the sentence is best left as it is, so the correct choice is "no improvement".


Verification / Alternative check:
You can cross check with other natural sentences: "Her knowledge of mathematics impressed the teacher", "His knowledge of local customs is remarkable." In each case, "knowledge of" is the standard pattern. If you replace knowledge with familiarity, you must change the preposition: "familiarity with mathematics", "familiarity with local customs". Because the test sentence already uses the correct collocation, there is nothing to fix. Grammar references on collocations confirm that "knowledge of" and "familiarity with" are the normal and accepted structures.


Why Other Options Are Wrong:

  • Knowing: functions more as a verb form or gerund and does not fit naturally in "someone's knowing of the history".
  • Familiarity: would require "with" instead of "of", so using it with "of" creates a preposition error.
  • Know how: is informal, usually written know-how, and refers to practical skill, not primarily historical information.
  • Knowledge and experience: changes the meaning and makes the sentence wordier without necessity; the original sentence only comments on knowledge.


Common Pitfalls:
Many candidates assume that if a question appears in a test, there must be an error, and they automatically choose an alternative instead of considering "no improvement". This leads them to accept unnatural phrases like "knowing of the history". Another pitfall is treating near synonyms as freely interchangeable. In English, specific prepositions often pair with specific nouns, so knowledge of and familiarity with are not interchangeable without adjusting the whole phrase. Always read the full sentence, test each option carefully and remember that "no improvement" is often the correct choice in such questions.


Final Answer:
The best version of the sentence is unchanged, so the correct answer is no improvement; "The guide's knowledge of the history of the monument surprised me" is already correct and natural.

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