Error is in third part. Every, each, either, neither are adjectives that are always followed by a singular pronoun. Every being singular takes singular subject. Therefore ?their ideas? should be replaced with? his/her idea?.
Error is in second part. Replace ?have? with ?had?. Since two events are mentioned and both occurred in the past, the even that happened first will be expressed in past perfect tense. Hence ?had conquered? is the correct form.
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